Monday, 2 July 2012

Slab n' Ernie's Rendition (try-out for TAAFI Workshop)

Here is another piece of storyboard from me for TAAFI (it's so soon)! I originally made one:
Fuzz Trauma Section 
But then I saw this beautiful piece of Try-Out (He ain't going though):
 Paul Badilla: Storyboard Slab & Ernie
I realized that my original try-out was too cluttered. So I tried again.

Keep in mind these characters' personalities: Ernie is the evil one. Slab, being obviously younger, is just following his horrid ways so he won't get hit.

Enjoy!






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2 comments:

  1. it's very hard to tell what's happening

    or where anybody is

    or who that person is in the last panels or what she is doing

    story sketches should clearly tell a story so the reader can easily follow what's happening

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    1. Thank you for the next steps Mr.K; I'm taking those comments to mind so I can improve on it

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